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I'm writing an essay on being a physician for an english class. However, I'm stuck on how to start out my introduction. Any tips from anyone on how I can make this sound good?

What are some of the things that physicians do? How are they important in society? If you include those it will help.

Can anyone who uses proficient English correct my Essay?
I am an international student and in holidays at the moment.
I would like to improve my English writing skills.
I've typed my essay below.

Please correct grammatical mistakes and suggest me better expressions for awkward setences.

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Our society has placed a critical restriction on drinking and smoking ages, especially on the younger people since drinking at early ages is thought to be harmful for their bodies. However, younger people at present take in plenty amount of nutrition, compared to the past generation, and as a result they have better-developed bodies. With such physical change to the younger generation’s body, smoking and drinking could be still harmful for the health. That is, we still have to hold the strategy onto the younger people due to several reasons.

First of all, the most obvious reason why we have to keep such strategy is rapid physical growth of younger people does not mean they are emotionally mature. Even though they may not be able to find any difficulty in doing smoking or drinking, they are still too immature to distinguish what is right or wrong. That is why they have to be protected under the legal circumstance and be limited doing something that could be harmful at early ages. In addition, smoking has already proved to be harmful for all people regardless of ages. That means at whatever ages they are smoking, it is still harmful for them. For the case of smoking, young people aged in teenagers spend most of their time on studying. However, committing alcohol abuse during adolescence, they must cause many different social problems. According to recent research, the students who drink heavily and frequently have shown an impaired memory ability, being three times more likely to attempt suicide than those who do not drink. Most certainly, there is no study on how better the younger generation’s body has developed than the previous generation. Therefore, we should not decide yet to ease the restriction on underage drinking and smoking policy.

It seems to be we should not ease the restriction on underage drinking and smoking policy yet at this stage due to several reasons. Whatever has taken place, it is generally true that smoking and drinking at early age are very harmful and further other problems associated with them can be caused by the younger people who abuse them. Scientists need to study more on how human being’s body has developed and until then, such a furious debated should be suspended.

Our society has placed a critical restriction on drinking and smoking ages, especially on the younger people since drinking at early ages is thought to be harmful for their bodies. However, younger people at present take in plenty of nutrition compared to past generations and, as a result, they have better developed bodies. With such physical changes to the younger generation’s bodies, smoking and drinking can be still harmful for the health and that is why we still have to hold on to several strategies for the sake of the younger people.

First of all, the most obvious reason why we have to keep such strategy is that the rapid physical growth of younger people does not mean they are emotionally mature. Even though they may not be able to find any difficulty in smoking or drinking, they are still too immature to distinguish what is right and wrong. That is why they have to be protected under legal circumstances and be limited from doing something that could be harmful at early ages. Secondly, smoking has already proved to be harmful for many people of all ages. That means that, at whatever ages they are smoking, it is still harmful for them. In the case of smoking, young teenagers spend most of their time studying. However, by committing alcohol abuse during adolescence, they must cause many different social problems. According to recent research, the students who drink heavily and frequently have shown impaired memory ability, being three times more likely to attempt suicide than those who do not drink. Most certainly, there is no study on how much better the younger generation’s bodies have developed in comparison to the previous generations. Therefore, we should not decide yet to ease the restriction on under-age drinking and smoking policy.

It seems as if we should not ease the restriction on under-age drinking and smoking policy at this stage due to several reasons. Whatever has taken place, it is generally true that smoking and drinking at early age are very harmful and further problems associated with them can be caused by the younger people who abuse them. Scientists need to study more on how human beings' bodies have developed and, until then, such a furious debate should be suspended.

I am writing an essay on the arguement that students should not be required to write essays in a standardized format (timed and on paper), however, I can’t think of any sources to back up my arguement that I could use. Any help?

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I am in the process of writing an English essay commenting on a particular chapter in the book we are currently studying. I have to explain how the chapter is made tense and dramatic.

Can anyone give me any tips as to how to start my essay, how to generally write it and how to end my essay?

I don't want it done for me, just need some tips.

Thanks in advance.

Hi M — First, identify 2 or 3 factors that make the chapter dramatic/tense.

First paragraph — introduce your ideas… "this chapter is tense and dramatic because…"

Second paragraph — go into detail about the first thing. Provide examples

Third/fourth paragraph - same thing with your other factors

Last paragraph - wrap it up. Summarize what you just wrote about. "The author used…. to make the reader feel…"

I’ve been trying and trying to find a good source of information in how to structure a good essay, specially for the integrated writing essay of the TOEFL exam, but no luck.
Plz post some free sites or Information regarding this matter.
Thanks in advance

It's not that easy to find much free preparation material online (though there are a number of books and courses available) but hopefully the links below will help you. Part of the reason that there might not be much detailed info for free on the web is that it appears the writing portion would just follow the form of typical essay, (thesis/introduction, body/supporting points, conclusion) and if you follow the basics, and put in some time and effort, you should do very well.

http://goodlucktoefl.com/2-1-4-TOEFL_writing_skills.html

http://www.ets.org/Media/Tests/TOEFL/pdf/TOEFL_Tips.pdf

http://www.ezinearticles.com/?Can-You-Write-a-TOEFL-Essay?&id=746315

I have 3 essays to write for school and im really stressed, any tips??
by the way the essays are for RE, Science, AND English =/

Oh I hated essays…
When I am familiar with the topic, I start somewhere in the middle of the essay. I just pick the first piece of information that comes to mind about the topic and start there or even just type out a conversation with myself asking questions and responding. From there, I flesh out other points, and I can see what else needs to be added. Towards the end, I'm reorganizing the points I'm making, seeing if there's an idea that needs to be explained more, and fine-tuning the language. What stresses me out is I don't know where to start and I get overwhelmed by the thought of having to explain a giant prompt and body of information, so this strategy works well for me.

If I'm not familiar with the topic, I sit down with all my resources and take notes on interesting things about the topic and see if I can't organize the notes into a cohesive paper. Then, again, I just pick whichever subtopic I feel like writing about most and start there. After all, by then I already have an outline to keep me on track and to show me the big picture.

As for handling three essays, it's the same idea. An essay alone is so big I can't start writing. I break it down and just start writing about something relevant, a little part. The important thing is to work on a small enough scale so you don't get overwhelmed, and just glance at the big picture to keep yourself on track. And, for three essays, just keep writing. Eventually writing 5 pages at a time seems pretty short.

Hope this helps!