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		<title>Comment on Can anyone good in writing essay correct my essay? by jamesmason01</title>
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		<dc:creator>jamesmason01</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Dec 2008 06:55:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Our society has placed a critical restriction on drinking and smoking ages, especially on the younger people since drinking at early ages is thought to be harmful for their bodies. However, younger people at present take in plenty of nutrition compared to past generations and, as a result, they have better developed bodies. With such physical changes to the younger generation’s bodies, smoking and drinking can be still harmful for the health and that is why we still have to hold on to several strategies for the sake of the younger people.

First of all, the most obvious reason why we have to keep such strategy is that the rapid physical growth of younger people does not mean they are emotionally mature. Even though they may not be able to find any difficulty in smoking or drinking, they are still too immature to distinguish what is right and wrong. That is why they have to be protected under legal circumstances and be limited from doing something that could be harmful at early ages. Secondly, smoking has already proved to be harmful for many people of all ages. That means that, at whatever ages they are smoking, it is still harmful for them. In the case of smoking, young teenagers spend most of their time  studying. However, by committing alcohol abuse during adolescence, they must cause many different social problems. According to recent research, the students who drink heavily and frequently have shown impaired memory ability, being three times more likely to attempt suicide than those who do not drink. Most certainly, there is no study on how much better the younger generation’s bodies have developed in comparison to the previous generations. Therefore, we should not decide yet to ease the restriction on under-age drinking and smoking policy. 

It seems as if we should not ease the restriction on under-age drinking and smoking policy at this stage due to several reasons. Whatever has taken place, it is generally true that smoking and drinking at early age are very harmful and further problems associated with them can be caused by the younger people who abuse them. Scientists need to study more on how human beings&#39; bodies have developed and, until then, such a furious debate should be suspended.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;How is that?  Better?
Jim in Melbourne.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Our society has placed a critical restriction on drinking and smoking ages, especially on the younger people since drinking at early ages is thought to be harmful for their bodies. However, younger people at present take in plenty of nutrition compared to past generations and, as a result, they have better developed bodies. With such physical changes to the younger generation’s bodies, smoking and drinking can be still harmful for the health and that is why we still have to hold on to several strategies for the sake of the younger people.</p>
<p>First of all, the most obvious reason why we have to keep such strategy is that the rapid physical growth of younger people does not mean they are emotionally mature. Even though they may not be able to find any difficulty in smoking or drinking, they are still too immature to distinguish what is right and wrong. That is why they have to be protected under legal circumstances and be limited from doing something that could be harmful at early ages. Secondly, smoking has already proved to be harmful for many people of all ages. That means that, at whatever ages they are smoking, it is still harmful for them. In the case of smoking, young teenagers spend most of their time  studying. However, by committing alcohol abuse during adolescence, they must cause many different social problems. According to recent research, the students who drink heavily and frequently have shown impaired memory ability, being three times more likely to attempt suicide than those who do not drink. Most certainly, there is no study on how much better the younger generation’s bodies have developed in comparison to the previous generations. Therefore, we should not decide yet to ease the restriction on under-age drinking and smoking policy. </p>
<p>It seems as if we should not ease the restriction on under-age drinking and smoking policy at this stage due to several reasons. Whatever has taken place, it is generally true that smoking and drinking at early age are very harmful and further problems associated with them can be caused by the younger people who abuse them. Scientists need to study more on how human beings&#39; bodies have developed and, until then, such a furious debate should be suspended.<br /><b>References : </b><br />How is that?  Better?<br />
Jim in Melbourne.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Can anyone good in writing essay correct my essay? by Rrrr</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rrrr</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 20 Dec 2008 06:29:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This is not considered as an essay. A basic essay has an introduction, body (minimum but not limited to 3 paragraphs) and a conclusion. Also, you should use words like first, second, third, etc. if you are entering different points. You may also use words like perhaps, besides, for this reason, moreover, furthermore, in conclusion or to conclude, in addition, etc. Other things that should help organize your essay are a cluster/brainstorm or an outline. Don&#39;t forget to cite your source. Remember to take one side of the issue. Oh! don&#39;t forget to proof read.  I truly hope all this help.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;Education (took all required english courses for my career) and life experience writing essays.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This is not considered as an essay. A basic essay has an introduction, body (minimum but not limited to 3 paragraphs) and a conclusion. Also, you should use words like first, second, third, etc. if you are entering different points. You may also use words like perhaps, besides, for this reason, moreover, furthermore, in conclusion or to conclude, in addition, etc. Other things that should help organize your essay are a cluster/brainstorm or an outline. Don&#39;t forget to cite your source. Remember to take one side of the issue. Oh! don&#39;t forget to proof read.  I truly hope all this help.<br /><b>References : </b><br />Education (took all required english courses for my career) and life experience writing essays.</p>
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		<title>Comment on How do I write good essays to win contests/sweepstakes? by English King</title>
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		<dc:creator>English King</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Dec 2008 23:49:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>aviod spelling/grammer mistakes and to use expansive vocabulary, btw what kind of movie is it, depends what movie it is... if you want advice on what to write.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>aviod spelling/grammer mistakes and to use expansive vocabulary, btw what kind of movie is it, depends what movie it is&#8230; if you want advice on what to write.<br /><b>References : </b></p>
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		<title>Comment on How do I write good essays to win contests/sweepstakes? by hickcrazy1</title>
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		<dc:creator>hickcrazy1</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 09 Dec 2008 22:52:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Have a clever opener and a funny closing...use short 10-15 word sentences ..don't go crazy with caps or punctuation. Don't use obscure language. Be sure you have spelled and punctuated correctly....Good luck, I hope you win!
&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Have a clever opener and a funny closing&#8230;use short 10-15 word sentences ..don&#8217;t go crazy with caps or punctuation. Don&#8217;t use obscure language. Be sure you have spelled and punctuated correctly&#8230;.Good luck, I hope you win!<br />
<br /><b>References : </b></p>
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		<title>Comment on Why do college applications require so many different essays? by Jessica</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jessica</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Dec 2008 17:45:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>use the common app.
it saved me a lot of time because there's only one essay
this way you can spend more time perfecting your essay&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>use the common app.<br />
it saved me a lot of time because there&#8217;s only one essay<br />
this way you can spend more time perfecting your essay<br /><b>References : </b></p>
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		<title>Comment on Why do college applications require so many different essays? by Justin O</title>
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		<dc:creator>Justin O</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 03 Dec 2008 17:27:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>no. that would make far too much sense.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>no. that would make far too much sense.<br /><b>References : </b></p>
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